DESIGN RESEARCH DISSERTATION - RESEARCH FOR PUBLICATION

DESIGN RESEARCH DISSERTATION - RESEARCH FOR PUBLICATION

18/06/21 - 09/07/21 (Week 12 - Week 15)

Chan Jing Wen (0340480)
Design Research Dissertation

Research For Publication

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INSTRUCTIONS



Research for Publication

Week 12 (18/06/21)

I started by looking into what was needed for this article. I then downloaded the raw file and started copy and pasting parts from my dissertation into the new document. I managed to finish everything except the findings and discussion section.

Week 13 (25/06/21)

This week, I finished everything that was needed for the article. Below is my attempt from Week 12 and 13:

Figure 1.1 Draft 1

Week 14 (02/07/21)

After receiving feedback from Dr Hayati, I made amendments to the article. Below is the submission file:

Figure 1.2 Final Submission

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FEEDBACK

Week 13 (25/06/21)

•  I can use the findings I’ve done through my primary data since I’m focusing on the first point of my research objective. However, I'll need to relook into it and see how I will correlate them.
• I can only include 3 figures.
• I'll have to think of how to reduce my scope.
• I should look at the word count of the author’s raw file. Maybe copy and paste the content. If the current sections can’t fully fit, just try to rephrase and identify the key points that need to be included.
• Can consider my section 2.1 to be included as the introduction too. See which suits.
• Focus on all UI related findings.

Week 14 (02/07/21)

• Abstract has an overview in the first 2 sentences. I managed to highlight the gap that led to the research. Overall, everything that's needed is there. I'll just try to check the English.
• Maximum of 5 keywords after the abstract.
• Punctuation should be after the bracket for citation.
• When talking about m-government, the example given should be the content, not the device.
• The problem statement should also highlight the gap.
• Can add tables or figures.
• Need to describe the instrument design using the 4W1H system.
• Sections in the online questionnaire that can answer this article should be highlighted.
• I'll need to correlate the research objective to the methodology.